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There is nothing wrong with this sentence.
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All punctuation and grammar is correct.
Answer: Ponyboy collapses at the lot, as his brothers and gang rush to help him. The next thing Pony remembers is waking up at home. He doesn't remember being in the hospital or being unconscious for three days, but he does remember that both Johnny and Dally are dead.
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The conflict is the character is not happy and feels like not many people are happy and can stay happy where they are. The character is sad about the conflict.