Answer: Janie drew as much attention to herself in the tobacco incident that you would have thought she was running around naked.
Explanation:
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Answer:
I identified six....
* adding the comma in the number
* the capitalized E in Egyptians
* 'a lot' is 2 words, not one (though, 'a lot like' should be written as 'similar to')
* 'ares' is spelled 'ours'
* a question mark has been added
* the word 'over' should be written as 'more than'
Explanation:
Would you believe that more than 7,000 years ago ancient Egyptians liked to bowl on alleys a lot like (similar to) ours?
