Answer:
The ten errors are the one with (*):
One reason for this anxiety is that students are rarely taught to evaluate *their* own work. They have no criterion for *evaluating* their own performance. Instead, they *fell* prey to the whims of chance good or bad marks just happen or depend on luck such as what lecturer they have or *reflect* their level of natural cleverness. This can leave students falling disempowered or *drifted* even if their marks are good. Students can feel very vulnerable and may worry about *suddenly* being exposed as stupid. *Anxiety* may create a vicious cycle such students can not settle down to study can not focus attention can not take *in* what they read or can not remember *what* they learnt and this reinforces their suspicion that really they *lack* intelligence. This is very common so it is important to look on what we mean by intelligence.
Explanation:
1.- Them should be changed for their going from the object pronoun to the possessive adjective.
2.- evaluations changes for evaluating going from the noun to the verb
3.- felt changes to fell felt is for emotions and felt is to become the prey.
4.- The word reflect can be deleted to present two noun phrases as options.
5.- drift changes to drifted to keep cohesion with the previous adjective in the sentence
6.- sudden changes to suddenly going from the adjective to the adverb.
7.- Anxious goes to anxiety from the adjective to the noun.
8.- on goes to in, the use of a different particle gives the idea of absorption of knowledge.
9.- which goes to what to keep a cohesive structure with the previous sentences
10.- lacks goes to lack since it is not a third person and it has to be conjugated differently.
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Answer:
Herbert decided today was the day, He was going to buy a pet today. He jumped in his jetta and left his flat. He drove to the nearest pet store on the corner of Berkeley ave. They were a full menagerie, with all sorts of different animals. Slipping his hated mask on he entered the loud store. The cawing of parrots and yips of puppies were music to his ears Scaly creatures with claws and bright colors were at the top of list or animals he might want to buy. But as he passed the guppies section his mind changed. The guppies flashed there colors and swam swiftly through the aquarium. He picked out a bright orange and white guppy that was a medium size. He named her Georgia. The woman working there put her in a clear plastic bag. On his way home he kept Georgia in his lap but didn't realize that the water from her bag was spilling everywhere. He rushed home, and when he got there he ran inside to place poor Georgia in water before she could die. He got fish water all over his hands. This is disgusting Herbert thought to himself, so he pumped soap into his hands and washed them thoroughly. Then he looked at Georgia and was glad that he picked her instead of a snake or lizard.
Hope this helps!!
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I just write down the question and the correct answer.
I mean, its just a test and in all honesty, i could care less...
BUTTTTTTTTTTT the correct answer is to be a good student!!
learn from your mistakes! build character!
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