Answer: Anne Frank was brave in so many ways. She was brave because when she was in hiding from the Nazis she had to live every day knowing the Nazis could find her. She lived every day worrying, hoping if she could ever go to school again, if she could ever see her friends or even her cat.
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Latrine is a toilet or outhouse.
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I think you should switch to Sila's POV. One thing that might be fun to add is how she (maybe, theoretically, if you want to) got shivers/goosebumps when Seth helped her out of the pond. Or how she could feel Seth's eyes on her as she fed the ducks. Or how she could sense that he was withholding information about her (the family stuff), she could tell that he was biting his tounge about something. Or a comment on the nickname "prettyboy". I would love to see the car scene, and maybe a sweatshirt could be given to dry <em>someone</em> off. You could describe Seth's car and how it's (pick a quality) reflects or is the opposite of how Seth acts. Another thing about love stories is the smell of someone you like is a smell you like..
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i'm honestly very interested in this story and I hope you keep writing it!! :)
I had to work very hard, riding my bike. I had to get in shape and all that stuff. Last year I won state and got 8th in nationals all because I worked for it!
