Cramming for things to get done is generally a bad practice although for some they may consider this as an inspiration to get things done while beating the deadline. The time management that can be suggested to Sue is that she prioritize the things that needs to be done first and allot a specific time slot for her to do her assignments on time.
Is this a statement or a question
What fire? There was no fire.
To mark a section that should be condensed, you should put a Parentheses around it.
Parenthesis is used as some sort of explanatory or qualifying words , clauses, or even sentences that could be inserted to mark a condensed section
You must write chronological and go intro…middle…conclusion