Answer:
I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
Explanation:
The fact that people's lives are beyond their own control.
A metaphor is a speech device that compares one object to another object using words that associate them. In this case, the lines that use this literary device is A which compares hemisphere as the master of its own house.
Answer:
3
Explanation:
Sentence three gives evidence, stating that city buses tend to run late. As opposed to the other sentences, it backs up what the author is claiming (the tardiness policy needs to be revised) other than just bulking up the claim.
Answer: it’s B fact claim
Explanation:
I had to screenshot it because it’s not allowing me to write it for some reason
