He assisted Thomas Jefferson in drafting the Declaration of Independence in 1776
Thank you for answering your own question.
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I think it is good. However, I think it would be better if you had explained the description of Alice and Edgar before you went into the part with "Alice stared at Edgar with warm but concerned eyes. He glanced back at her and quietly asked, "What's wrong, Mama?".
I thought this because it went from William to Alice/Edgar which was kind of a confusing jump (I thought Alice was the wife). Overall, it was really good.
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<h3>I don't feel like it</h3>
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Sometimes that is true. If you are persuading someone to eat non-organic food, you use strong and meaningful tones.