Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
He means that Cunningham is a good man he just doesn't understand that hes being racist atticus understands racism unlike the rest of the people at the jail <span />
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In this busy lives of ours stress always striks. Thats why it is always important to eat a healthy and nutritios diet. And thats why teenagers are offering nutritious diet schemes and offers.
so it is important to have a nutritious diet because it hellllllllllppppppps! In every book every science class during conversations we get a topic that is about help. So, to keep fit and healthy and staw away from a felling known as stress.
So, yes as i said before tennagers are offering these sorts of diets as it helps to stay fit.
Answer: portmanteau
Explanation: a portmanteau is a word
And it’s formed by using two different terms into one.
