Hello! You've done well so far by adding a simile (stanza 3, line 1) and repetition (stanza 1, beginning of lines 1 and 2). But I'd like to help add some personification to the poem with the first 2 lines since A. it rarely shows up and B. it's one of the most important factors towards a poem when creating something with such detail.
"The future winking at us wishing us good luck
as we wash away worries with ideas of us being stuck"
These two lines offer personification because we give the "future" a human attribute of winking and wishing luck towards a person. Also, Alliteration is included in both these lines which can be seen by the repetition of "w"'s makes it's way in the second half of the first line and the first half of the second line.
I want to add some repetition for the end since you started with repetition at the beginning since it'll bring your ideas together in a much neater way.
"My family still keeps it's traditional pride
My family will push on making one last stride."
You have the repetition in "my family" as you used above, and it explains the ending of the book with the family still being who are they, only they accomplished there goal by making one final action, which is making the move.
I hope these lines help and if you need any more help, feel free to ask!
Answer:
The poem is a parental guide by Kipling for his son teaching him about what it means to be a true and grown man. He reveals that a true man is not swayed by others but holds on his true values.
Explanation:
"If" is the most celebrated poem by Rudyard Kipling. The poem serves as a parental guide for his son. The speaker of the poem is teaching his son to stay true to his values no matter what the world might say about him. The speaker asks his son to trust himself even when no one does.
<u>In the last line of the poem </u>
<em><u>"And—which is more—you’ll be a Man, my son"</u></em>
<u> suggests that when the speaker's son will adhere to the teachings given in the poem, then he will become a true Man. This suggests that Kipling's view of grown man lies in the self-confidence, forgiveness, patience, and the virtues that he mentioned in the poem. He tells that the ability to be a true and grown man lies within oneself</u>.
Answer:
captitalize all I’s that stand alone. You have a lot of long sentences to try to Add some periods instead of commas.
Explanation:
Answer:
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Explanation:
