Answer:
Revising a paragraph can be done by anyone with basic grammar and spelling skills. The key to revising a paragraph is choosing an area to focus on so that the process isn’t overwhelming.
Explanation:
The answer was actually D.
D.) It creates tension by moving from the slower pace of the description to the faster pace of Bob's dialogue, which suggests an uneasiness on Bob's part.
Answer:
Deep structure refers to the meaning of a sentence. Surface structure refers to how a sentence is worded.
In this case, this sentences "the dog chased the cat"" and ""the cat was chased by the dog"" have the same deep structure (the dog chased the cat) but different surface structure because the second one is in passive voice to give emphasis to the cat (the cat was chased by the dog).
It is emotional I think because if u read it you feel moved.
Tips:
have a topic sentence
make your sentences or paragraphs very detailed
always have 1-6 paragraphs
organize your writing
know your vocab
hope it helps!