Answer:
<u>Present</u><u> </u><u>perfect</u><u> </u><u>tense</u>
- <u>Affirmative</u><u> </u><u>sentense</u><u>☔</u>
2. The concert has been postponed.
3. The computer is being used at the moment.
4. The conversation was being recorded.
5. When we got to the stadium we found out that the game had been canceled. (I’m not sure if you can use we, if you can’t, use this sentence: “The game at the stadium has been canceled.”)
6. When we got to the stadium we found out that the stadium is building a new ring road around the city. (Again I’m not sure if you can use we, if you can’t, use this sentence: “The stadium is building a new ring road around the city.”)
7. A new hospital was built near the airport.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
apex:
If all of the actors in the production were children, it would convey a feeling of innocence.
