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Hey There!
I think this is amazing what you wrote, there is nothing that you need to change except for the ending sentence, you need to change that into "And I can't wait to see who I become." then it would be perfect.
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Can you provide the story, the question is out of context.
A time loop kind ...!! I've always found them fun and interesting so yeaaa those.
the purpose of the passage is
D) to persuade soldiers to consider the value of Freedom and fight for it
