<span>1. </span><span>Mark had a gift for empathy; he seemed to be able to
relate to anyone’s pain and sorrow. </span>
<span>2. </span><span>Over the summer, many people plan to travel to exotic places,
and play at the beach. </span>
<span>3. </span>The short excerpt uses “I” repeatedly. I would
suggest that she erases the repeated “I” and replace them with something else.
<span>4.
</span>I am guessing that the underlined is “good at
listening and feeling my pain”? I would suggest to replace that with the
word “sentimental.”
<span>5.
</span>A synonym for
“faithfulness” is fidelity.
<span>6.
</span><span>I never thought I would
have to write and deliver the eulogy of anyone, let alone my best
friend.<span> </span></span>
In "The Black Cat", by Edgar Allan Poe, the narrator's participation in the cat's death foreshadows <em>The narrator himself was going to be hanged as punishment for his crime.</em>
Foreshadow is a literary device, that consists of clues to suggest what is going to happen later in the story. In this short story, the narrator starts saying that he is about to be hanged the day after he wants to give a detailed description of the occurrences that led to his confinement. He himself is going to be hanged as punishment for his crimes, the same way in which he hanged Pluto, his first black cat.
Answer: I read the text and it seems perfect and I think you don't need to add anything else.
Explanation:
Analyzing the task and the way you responded it seems to me that you did it well. You were precise in each of the years. I think you should not add more since it would be a bit more extensive and the important thing about this task is to point out the most important events of each year. In my opinion, I wouldn't change anything, I think it's very good.
I could also see that you used the connectors that the statement showed. You have followed the instructions very well. Congratulations!
