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MA_775_DIABLO [31]
3 years ago
9

Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative?

English
2 answers:
aniked [119]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

D

Explanation:

Leokris [45]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

B. Explaining how Hannah would care for the horses.

Explanation:

This would be the best revision to the narrative because it would explain Hannah's love for horses in more detail. It would show how she loves the horses by explaining how she cares for them.

All the other revisions are more or less so irrelevant, as the point of the narrative is to explain Hannah's love of horses.

I hope this helps! :)

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