I tried to do it but every time i pushed answer it wouldn't work so i had to make this new account sorry that i couldn't help
Answer:
yes i can look at ur paper
Explanation:
ok im pretty sure the second pic u put is the first pg so im just gonna go with that
intro:
- i think u should elaborate more on the first quote u put, and then introduce the book or u dont have to
----- yes its a very cool quote---
--- since there is so much prejudice in the book, how does it show that prejudice is a "dirty" word?
- u use 'prejudice' like 2345x in the intro paragraph and the same thing is repeated many times in three diff. sentences
so the point of the essay is to look at different examples of prejudice right...
if it is:
- maybe come up with clearer ts for each body paragraph stating what "type" of prejudice is being displayed and also how it is displayed, i see that u are comparing to each characters, but in the end, how do all the characters relate to each other and exemplify the theme of ur essay?
its good just wc and also dont repeat stuff and flow
that was fun
imma sleep now
