Can someone give me feedback about my thesis statement? Is it good? Should I change a few things? Thank you :)

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2 answers:

Lynna [10]3 years ago

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I think , i actually know this is good. go ahead and turn it in. it's amazing love

ratelena [41]3 years ago

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I don’t think you need to change this, it looks great, just check it to make sure it contains no plagiarism before you turn it in.

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