Syntax helps the paper/story/paragraph/book flow properly. Without syntax, you're going to having this one big confusing mess that almost no one understands.
Answer:
A woman walks to the doors of the store, the doors open with a soft whoosh and is meet with warm air. She steps past the threshold and is greeted with the sight of other people ranging in ages walking around holding red baskets some had items within it. Grabbing a red basket, noting the lightness of it before walking past others to look at the coffees. She stops in front of the coffees and is surrounded with the smell of roasted coffee beans, hints of sweetness and bitterness in the air. An old woman stops nearby and grabs a dark roast an walks away after giving her a smile, the imposing shelves tower of her with hundreds of different brands and flavors. She tentatively reach's out and grabs a light roast with small pieces of candy cane's and sets it softly in the basket she is holding in her left hand. She wanders the store for a little while before walking to the self checkout, after paying for the coffee she puts it in a plastic bag and walks to the doors that open with a small whoosh and is greeted by a rush of cold air.
This help?
Answer:
The subject-verb agreement is wrong. The correct sentence would be:
- Excitement between the two groups has risen after the election.
Explanation:
<u>If we ask the verb a simple question, we can find the subject: "What has risen after the election? Excitement between the two groups." Even though the answer is long, the simple subject itself is comprised of just one singular word: "excitement". This is the most important word, the one to which the verb refers. We can even remove the words that come after it, and the effect or meaning will be the same: "Excitement has risen after the election."</u>
The problem with "Excitement between the two groups have risen after the election" is that "have" is agreeing with "groups". However, as seen above, "groups" is not the most important word in the subject. Therefore, the verb should not agree with it.
