How do I rewrite this: There is a long hallway. Ben walks down it. He sees a series of doors. None of the doors has a sign on it
. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He hears a noise. He looks over his shoulder. Nobody is there.
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Explanation:
There is a long hallway that Ben walking down to it. He sees a serious of doors, none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose, he tries the first one, it just lead him to an empty room. Ben hears a noise, he looks over his shoulder but, nobody is there.
Ben walks down a long hallway. He sees a series of doors, but none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one, but it's just an empty room. He hears a noise behind him so he looks over his shoulder only to see no one there.
Many wild animals carry zoonotic diseases (illnesses that can be transferred from animals to humans), such as Brucellosis, Salmonella and Ringworm. They often carry parasites, as well, that can be transmitted to humans or other pets. Any way you look at it, keeping a wild animal as a pet is a dangerous proposition.
I want to surprise my mother by throwing her a party for her birthday. It will take place at my house on May 17 and make sure you come before 6:30 because my mom gets home at 7 and we’re going to turn off the lights and hide and surprise her. You may bring a gift for her if you want she likes chocolates! Can’t wait to see you there
