Question

How do I rewrite this: There is a long hallway. Ben walks down it. He sees a series of doors. None of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He hears a noise. He looks over his shoulder. Nobody is there.

Answer 1

Answer:

Hi... I'm not sure... but hope it's gonna be useful

Explanation:

There is a long hallway that Ben walking down to it. He sees a serious of doors, none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose, he tries the first one, it just lead him to an empty room. Ben hears a noise, he looks over his shoulder but, nobody is there.

Answer 2

Answer:

Hi there~

Ben walks down a long hallway. He sees a series of doors, but none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one, but it's just an empty room. He hears a noise behind him so he looks over his shoulder only to see no one there.  

Hope this helps

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