Read the following and determine if adding a coordinate or subordinate clause would improve the style and smoothness of the writ
ing. Choose the answer that best rewrites the sentence, or choose to leave it unedited. When I have an argument with someone, I do my best to resolve it quickly.
A. The sentence is fine as it is. B. While I have an argument with someone, I do my best to resolve it quickly. C. I have an argument with someone, but I do my best to resolve it quickly. D. I have an argument with someone. I do my best to resolve it quickly.
The given sentence is fine as it is. It is a complex sentence, which means that it consists of one independent and at least one dependent (subordinate) clause.
<em>I do my best to resolve it quickly.</em> - independent clause
<em>When I have an argument with someone... -</em> dependent clause
Option B is the second-best option. It's also a complex sentence, but it would be better to use <em>when </em>as the subordinating conjunction instead of <em>while</em>.
Option C is a compound sentence, which means that it consists of two independent clauses. <em>I have an argument with someone </em>isn't grammatically correct, which is why this option is incorrect. Option D is similar. The only difference is that the two independent clauses are separated.
Buzzards are widely known for their apperance being creepy or scary, When buzzards flock together they can be seen as one giant dark circle comparing Mr.Shiftlets thoughts or head to a group of buzzards could be taken as one dark cloud in his head or multiple eery thoughts being grouped together.
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Im not sure if this is the answer you are looking for but this is how I would answer hope it helps!
The sentence from Holes that implies Stanley is thoughtful toward others is:What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.
