Change of tone. You can change the tone of your voice to make the story more compelling
B is the answer
Explanation
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instead of saying Sparrow and Liam exchanged stairs across the library you could instead try saying Liam and Sparrows eyes met from across the room or across the library, or not. I think your story's fine, if you want to make it a few more sentence longer then maybe you can put like a little backstory to why Liam and Sparrow are fighting or not it's your story I'm just you know saying maybe if you want a few more sentences it's something to put.
Form good habits, know that you can still accomplish something despite the fact that there are several reasons not to or why you "can't", and know how to form good self-discipline for success.
Answer:
yea the journal should be right
Explanation:
it makes the most sense and has the best explanation
