Answer:
The first one is correct. The second one is a run-on sentence, like speaking without pausing at a comma to take a breath.
Yes, a celebrity has convinced me to do something, and it depends on people’s beliefs but probably useful because they are influencers and young people are easily influenced! Thank you so much for reading and have a great day! :)
The basic structure of an informative essay is very simple. It needs to have a beginning, middle, and end. These are known more formally as the introduction, body, and conclusion, respectively
During this year, one of my main goals was to change computers, since mine was showing malfunctions, besides being very old. However, my countries could not afford to pay for it, which means that this was a goal that I should be able to achieve alone. To achieve this, I started a search for part-time jobs, which would be difficult due to the moment we live in, but I will travel until I get a job as a website editor. I calculated how much I would earn for this job and set a deadline by which I would be able to buy the computer, if I added my salary money. I bought the computer in 3 months and my parents helped me to achieve my goal, although they did not help me with money, they helped me with the guidelines that I needed to write.
I am currently working on another goal. I would like to buy an apartment. I know this is going to be a long way, but I am looking forward to seeing how I will walk on it.
<h2>Answer:</h2>
Formal and Precise
<h2>Explanation:</h2>
Argumentative essays are those essays which provide a perfect solution to convince someone about an idea or opinion that is why their style of writing should be formal. The tone, the choice of words and the way those words are put together must be less personal and precise. For instance we want to provide information about an incident, we should use its exact date and time which means we should be precise.
