As a teenager in 1990, Salva led about 1,500 of the Lost Boys from Ethiopia across hundreds of desert miles southwest through Sudan to the United Nations-controlled Kakuma refugee camp near the Kenyan city of Lodawar. He lived in the barbed wire enclosed camp with 92,000 other refugees for nearly six years.
<span>C is the correct answer. Answers A, B and D are all written in passive voice, which can be pinpointed with the use of the ‘by phrase’, for example, ‘the part in the musical was hoped for [by Kylie]’. Such by phrases can be omitted in a passive and the phrase will still make sense.</span>
Answer:
The kind of error that needs to be fixed is:
3 verb tense inconsistencies
Explanation:
There are no run-on sentences, misspellings, or sentence fragments in the paragraph we are analyzing here. There are, however, verb tense inconsistencies. The narration begins in the past tense but, all of a sudden, a verb in the present appears. The pattern repeats throughout the passage, with verbs in the past and in the present being alternated. A way to correct such inconsistencies would be by simply using only past forms for all the verbs:
Roland was walking through the desert. The sun was setting, and he felt a chill. He carried his telescope and star map with him. He found the perfect spot, level and away from the road, and set up his tripod. He sat on the ground, crossed his legs, and waited for night to fall.
Answer
happy cause you get to look forward to the weekend!
Explanation:
