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Katen [24]
3 years ago
5

I know this has nothing to do with school, but I need help making my short story proper. Don't bully me, please-

English
1 answer:
max2010maxim [7]3 years ago
5 0
I would suggest-if this is for school- not using three periods but just one. After the first sentence in the second paragraph delete the “and” after four as well as the “and” after fangs. It’s also confusing to lead into the “hero like those other people” when vampires aren’t looked at as hero’s so i’d lead into that.
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