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Burka [1]
3 years ago
6

Can someone please check my essay

English
2 answers:
ser-zykov [4K]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

what's the prompt asking for? if the prompt is "do you have a real friend?" then you didn't really answer the question.  I mean you talked about being a loner in high school, but never did you mention if you have a real friend yourself.  

Also you kind of contradict yourself.  In the third paragraph, you say being a loner is ok, but not having friends isn't as bad as you think.  But in the next sentence, you start talking about how great your social emotional skills would be if you have friends.

mart [117]3 years ago
4 0

1. Don't use short forms: for example change your <em>you're</em><em> </em>to <em>you </em>are.

2. In the last paragraph's 1st sentence, if it is a quotation, then make its first word capital, and put a comma after <em>remember</em><em>.</em>

3. In last paragraph's 2nd sentence, change your <em>if </em><em> </em>to <em>If.</em>

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