During the war, Judy Duncan see a lot of victims of the war since she works in the hospital within the area that alter her perspective about humanity. In the end, Judy Duncan dies after a bomb was dropped in the hospital where she works.
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This is really good!!
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I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
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" I was nothing but a body. Perhaps even less: a famished stomach." 52
Here we see that in just a few days Elie feels like he has lost everything. He feels he has lost hope,faith, and his will to live.
First person thats how the story is told by one of the characters
answer, go back
answer, returning home with a renewed hope
