personally, I think its great, except that you use "mi persona" a bit too much, and in "no tiene uno hermano" its "un"not "uno". i speak spanish fluently, but i was Also raised into leraning english, so im sorry if i missed some things.
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Answer:
<em>The </em><em>answer</em><em> is</em><em> </em><em>D.</em><em> </em><em>Estuviste</em>
1)Esteban y si amigo van a ir a jugar fútbol
2)Angélica y el Sr.Rios va a ir de pesca
3)yo voy a ir a nadar
4)mis amigos y yo vamos a ir a estudiar para un examen