The turning point of a play or novel is its climax
I really like this piece. I enjoyed reading it and your word choice was excellent. There was an eloquent flow between lines, also. The only change I'd make would be the final line. Ending poetry can be difficult, of course. However, the final line is leaving me a little unsatisfied. I'd play around with it some more until you find something that sounds a little better.
Amazing job!!!!!
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it depends you know. people make wrong mistakes sometimes and it might be a man or a woman. Gender doesn't matter. It's how you make your own choice, it depends on what path you are going to. And I thank you U U