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Looks good revisions below
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Ok so you say State House twice in the first sentence, so maybe you could try using other words.
You also say, "Now known as the Liberty bell." And you say it right after saying that we call the hall Independence Hall, so say something like:
'And now, we call the bell, Liberty Bell.'
Put a comma after Pennsylvania Assembly. (First paragraph Fourth Sentence)
When you say "It would right to call lawmakers to meetings." Did you mean ring?
In paragraph 2, connect sentences 4 &5.
Otherwise it looks really good! You got good skill!!!
Hopefully that helped!
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common sense
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i dont know if it right :(
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Because I enjoy being indolent, there is nothing I find more pleasant than relaxing in bed.
Rather than fetch the ball, the indolent dog decided to take a nap.
Because the indolent man refused to work, he was unable to pay his bills.
I think you have a typo in your question.
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I feel an education at georgia tech will give me the good future I need.
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