Hello!
What you have so far is solid and straight-to-the-point. However, I would adjust it slightly in order to be more shocking to your audience.
Here is my suggestion: "Smog pollution is affecting earth's air quality and is causing the planet's temperature to rise at a rapid rate, which can be detrimental to all of earth's species if it is not controlled soon."
I am not entirely sure what your topic is or what you intend to persuade your audience into believing, so you can change what I have written into what works best for your essay. I would recommend adding an interesting/scary fact into it in order to convince your audience of the importance of your topic.
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
- Mal
Actually, Wala kang sasagutan dyaan kasi instructions or guidelines lang yan Ng activity na binigay sa inyo. Ang sabi sa panuto e May song and poem daw kayo na binasa/pinakinggan. And kailangan nyo lang isulat observation nyo dun sa poem and song sa sheet Ng paper. For example Ano yung napansin mo dun sa kanta and poem na magkaiba or magkapareho? Yun yung compare and contrast. Yung mga words na nakalagay jaan, as I’ve said, para lang syang guidelines or examples na words nyo na Pwede nyong gamitin sa pagsusulat nung mga naobserbahan nyo sa Tula at kanta
The 1920s were an age of dramatic social and political change. For the first time, more Americans lived in cities than on farms. The nation's total wealth more than doubled between 1920 and 1929, and this economic growth swept many Americans into an affluent but unfamiliar “consumer society
The answer is A , hope that helped .
