So the only thing I can think of to help this would be to kind of explain it in more detail. ( also I cant see the pink or the red so I cant help with those sorry :( )
Explanation:
As you should know the introduction is going to be somewhere near the top of the passage. ( For a little more help I think it would be in the first three paragraphs.)
For the facts they are pretty easy to find for they support the argument.
For the supports of the argument the best thing i can really say is to find the supporting details and try to work on it from there.
Lastly the conclusion this one shouldn't be that hard because you should know that it is pretty much at the end of the passage or essay
