Answer:
assonance : the repetition of the sound of a vowel near enough to each other for the echo to be discernible
anaphora : the use of a word referring to or replacing a word used earlier in a sentence, to avoid repetition
consonance : the recurrence of similar sounds, especially consonants, in close proximity
alliteration : the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words
You need a period after the first sentence. You also need an exclamation mark after Ahoy.
Its A . the residents are unwilling to welcome Valjean for the night .
The narrator could become repetitive, start rambling, making hasty generalizations, crazy assumptions.
