Hi. You did not submit the sample that the question refers to, nor did you submit your answer. This makes it impossible for this question to be answered. However, I will try to help you as best I can.
Your question asks you to compare your answer with a model answer. You don't show the context these two answers are related to, so you should look for that context in your paper. It is likely that these answers are related to the previous question.
To make the comparison you should note which elements these questions have similar or equal and how they complement each other. The more similar, the more complementary the two answers are. If the two answers do not complement each other, nor do they have any similar elements, it means that they are completely different.
Answer:
Burton creates mood and tone through the visual aspects of his films. These include the set design, dreary or macabre settings, and physical attributes of characters, like large eyes or sunken features. One thing that Burton has that authors do not is the aspect of visual storytelling.
Explanation:
Drugs mainly affect the brain. After taking drugs for a few days, your very addicted to the substance, and want a lot more of it. If you don't get more, it kills you confidence and well being, and this leads to depression and other seriously bad thoughts.
Precipitation returns to the water cycle through the form of runoff.
Attached is a diagram found on NASA's website. No copyright infringement intended ;)
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