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Paul [167]
2 years ago
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English
2 answers:
Gre4nikov [31]2 years ago
7 0

Incomplete question. Options:

f) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is very tall and made of glass; it is an experience that many people would like to have.

g) for a worthwhile experience, you should go to the aquadom in berlin, Germany; it is a  unique attraction.

h) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

j) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is sort of a different kind of an aquarium; it is something many people would like to go see.

Answer:

<u>h) the aquadom in berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a unique attraction that many people would love to experience.</u>

<u>Explanation:</u>

<em>Remember,</em> a thesis statement as used in research refers to a statement of claim about a particular subject. A good thesis statement should be effective, it must be specific, that is have a specific area of focus.

Ken's statement in <u>option h</u> makes a good thesis statement because it is specific; it specifically explains the reason why many would love to visit the aquadom in Germany, which is because it is unique.

nevsk [136]2 years ago
4 0

Answer:

H. The AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a  unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

Explanation:

The first paragraph with the original thesis statement is:

(1) When most people think of an aquarium, they probably imagine a fish  tank perched on a stand in someone’s living room. (2) Others might imagine a large  building where visitors gaze at fish behind extremely large plates of glass. (3) The  AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is an aquarium; it is something that many people  would love to experience.

Now, if you replace sentence 3 with option H, the first paragraph would look like:

(1) When most people think of an aquarium, they probably imagine a fish  tank perched on a stand in someone’s living room. (2) Others might imagine a large  building where visitors gaze at fish behind extremely large plates of glass. (H) The AquaDom in Berlin, Germany, is a completely different kind of aquarium; it is a  unique attraction that many people would love to experience.

Notice how the first paragraph sounds a lot better than it originally was. Option H is a good thesis because it summarizes the main point of Kevin's essay.

Hope this helps :)

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