It might help you better if you posted what you need proofread.
Mildreds choice to not tell montag about clarisse was insidious because the fact that Mildred forgot to tell montag about Clarisse death emphasizes their shallow, meaningless relationship as well as mildred’s ignorant , insensitive personality
Dear (blank),
I want you to know i deeply care about you and your health and with you eating so much junk food i thought it would be good to tel you a few things. Junk food leads to high Cholesterol levels high sugar levels and increases the rate of obesity. Obesity can also lead to multiple different health problems that are irreversible. please do start eating healthy.
<span>Jonathan is a humble being, he values a lot of things that were given to him by blessings of God. He has immense value of his life, family and a bicycle as well. He cherishes his life ever since he overcame the war and values the little things deeply.</span>