Answer:
Does the writing have a clear sense of purpose? *Is my paper's main idea, or thesis, clearly stated early on (within the first paragraph, ideally)? *Could I organize my ideas more logically (within a paragraph or among paragraphs)?
Explanation:
The moral of the story is life is a gift, and maintaining a balance with everything in moderation will ensure a long one. The wings represent the father giving his son life; the ocean and the sun represent the extremes of denying and overindulging yourself; flying in between is the answer.
