This seems to me like a little lonely farm in the middle of nowhere and it makes me feel kinda sad since it talks about the farm animals and the lonely corn next to the mountains in the background and it almost feels like a sad and emotional story. (it also makes me hungry since they were describing a farm with food)

-also lots of writing mistakes almost every other word was spelled incorrectly, if this is yours you should try to edit it in word or something.. hope this helped :)

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2 years ago

Make a good claim or introduction about dress codes in schools being bad for an essay.

Trava [24]

I think that dress codes are bad because kids can't wear what they want to. Some kids will express themselves through their clothing and having a dress code stops them from being themselves. They can't show creativate and it makes them unhappy. This is why I think dress codes are bad for schools.
Hope This Helps!
~Cupcake

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2 years ago