One of the most beautiful stories in the Bible is that of Joseph. Joseph was used by God to save Joseph's family from starvation
. Joseph's brothers were insanely jealous of Joseph. Joseph's brothers sold Joseph as a slave to a caravan of travelers going to Egypt. In Egypt, Joseph worked as a servant for many years until Pharaoh summoned Joseph to interpret a series of dreams. Pharaoh rewarded Joseph by giving Joseph a position managing the grain storage. In this position, Joseph met Joseph's brothers when Joseph's brothers came to buy grain. Joseph sent Joseph's brothers back for Joseph's father, and the family was once more united. Now replace some of the nouns with pronouns to improve the style. Be careful not to eliminate nouns that are needed to make the story clear.
One of the most beautiful stories in the Bible is that of Joseph. He was used by God to save his family from starvation. Joseph's brothers were insanely jealous of him. Joseph's brothers sold him as a slave to a caravan of travelers going to Egypt. In Egypt, Joseph worked as a servant for many years until Pharaoh summoned him to interpret a series of dreams. Pharaoh rewarded Joseph by giving him a position managing the grain storage. In this position, Joseph met his brothers when his brothers came to buy grain. Joseph sent his brothers back for his father, and the family was once more united.
