In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Helen and Tom have received permission to take Ruth<span> and their other friends to </span>Snow Camp<span> for the latter part of their winter break</span>
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Macbeth is not at peace because, in order to become a king, he murdered the previous king, Duncan. Not only does this murder make Macbeth consumed with guilt, but it triggers a series of events that make him feel more and more uneasy. Macbeth later murders Banquo, convinced that he also represents a threat to his power, while Duncan's son plots a revenge against Macbeth.
My Best Answer would be Judy learned that good friends can be found in any city she moves to.
Because Its a Good Hook / Story line to make a Plot out of and a Story
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-Dante
Answer:
D
Explanation:
you don't want to confuse your audience
