1.) The first had too much emotion it was hard to concentrate on the words. The second had controlled emotion which allowed you to understand the text easier.
2.) He looked at the camera while delivering his soliloquy.
Often, I lie awake at night At night, I ponder I lay awake and gaze upon the stars Counting sheep does not help me fall asleep The clock ticks, but I lie awake Until the rays of the morning sun hit my face
I changed this poem by adding more detail to the original lines. Since I did this, you can understand what is going on in the poem better.
