Then, in a brief paragraph, explain the way that these first two sections are organized. Be sure to clearly summarize the points of each section, and explain if there are any subsections. Be sure that you use transitions clearly so that the reader will understand the organization of the contents of these sections.
too much information in parentheses
This parenthetical citation has too much information in the parentheses.You actually do not need any parenthetical citation for this quote. There are a few reasons why. The first is that the author of the quote is stated in the quote's set up when it says "President John F. Kennedy said,". Also, this quote is well-known so it doesn't require a parenthetical citation since it has been quoted numerous times.
It should also be noted that Wikipedia is not a reliable source and should not be used as a source in a paper. One can easily find the full-text of Kennedy's inaugural address on another, more reliable site.
I feel 'while' would be the connecting word here. Without it the sentence flops and it helps add onto it with the extra sentence part.
I sharpened your pencil. You were away.
'While' should be the conjunction.
Answer:
HOLY CRA..P MONKS HAVE TALES???? NO WONDER HE WASNT IN SONIC
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