<span>Mike joined the Army, and he became more disciplined during the training. -is the correct way to rewrite the run-on sentence.</span>
Big words or what? What are you trying to explain?
Pros
it keeps the editors safe
if they make a mistake people can't come after them
people cannot communicate with them over subjects they have written about
cons
people can't give feedback to let them know if it is incorrect
editors can make things up on a page and fool many people
It is dark because Barnardo has trouble seeing the other guard.
This scene takes place at midnight and it is so dark Barnardo cannot see the other guard. Barnardo shows up for his shift, but he can't clearly make out who Francisco is. Francisco has the same problem because instead of answering Barnardo he tells him to identify himself first. They get it figured out and Barnardo begins his shift.
A main even of Douglass autobiography is the whipping of Aunt Hester, he includes details about the bloody nature of the whipping. He refers to her ""heart rending shrieks as he whipped upon her naked back 'til she was literally covered with blood. No words, no tears, no prayers from his gory victim seemed to move his iron heart from its bloody purpose. The louder she screamed, the harder he whipped; and where the blood ran fastest, there he whipped longest. He would whip her to make her scream and whip her to make her hush. And not until overcome by fatigue would he cease to swing the blood clotted cow skin." The words he used made up a powerful image. The image was to stir up emotions of the reader and persuade them
