Please proof read

English

2 answers:

Lesechka [4]3 years ago

7 0

Answer: Don't say portal

Explanation: When I read the word portal it made it sound like a story for a kindergartener instead put "they pushed her out of the flames reach" or something similar to that. Maybe a bit more detail about Fawn and how she lived and why the King came to the forest. Other than that it is a great story.

pogonyaev3 years ago

4 0

Answer:

after dwelled there, capitalize the T in the. after seventh b day, put a comma. a comma after arrived. Capitalize T in they. All she had left was the insignia etched pendant her parents gave her before pushing her through a portal that LAY just outside the forest.

Explanation:

Nice story, really like it. Very detailed.

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