1) D. no error
2) D. no error
3) B. have tooken - should be have taken
4) A.
5) D.
A comma cannot be used to correct most run-on sentences
Usually the issue with run on sentences is that they use too many commas, instead of breaking the sentence into two sentences.
<h3><u>"Craft based professions are dying out. We need to save them.”</u></h3>
<em>Introduction</em>
We all remember that there was once a time in which we used to play with toys of leaves, bamboos and sticks. Those wonderful memories! But where have they gone now?
<em>Body</em>
Our beautiful craftsmen's objects are now rarely or no longer available to us. We had a peculiar emotional relationship with those craftsmen and their creations. But now, they are replaced with industrial metal cars and shooting objects for the modern kids.
It makes us immensly sad but the reality is that now modern children doesnt want peaceful and quiet toys like ours but instead, they want violence toys as for craze.
When we allow our children to see videos of mass violence, it gets struck in their minds. So first the children should be taught to see good educational and positive entertainment videos. Secondly, we must teach them some good social behavior and not so many good manners. Thirdly, we must allow them to play outside with friends so that they wont be engaged a lot in internet and be distracted to immoral behaviours.
In these ways, we can continue our children to follow the traditional good path of craftsmen toys and theitlr behaviours.
<em>Conclusion</em>
Thus, we can save our old craftsmen people from being extinct in the past by following the above mentioned ways. These craftsmen indirectly influence us and our future generations. So, we must not lose them. Infact, life is more meaningful when we have our old memorious people and their creations with us in our surroundings.
Is this the whole question??
