There is no picture of the story.
My novel choice - Peak
Poor thesis - Peak Climbs a Mountain
(See how that gave no details whatsoever? It wasn't specific enough!)
There was an old lady who swallowed a cow.
I don’t know how she swallowed a cow!
She swallowed the cow to catch the goat.
She swallowed the goat to catch the dog.
She swallowed the dog to catch the cat.
She swallowed the cat to catch the bird.
She swallowed the bird to catch the spider
That wriggled and jiggled and wiggled inside her.
She swallowed the spider to catch the fly.
But I dunno why she swallowed that fly.
Perhaps she’ll die
The most successful record of all time!
Option A, "The most successful record of all time!" is a clause fragment.
"I saw you at practice run yesterday and I was very impressed with your ability"
