<em>Interesting question. Here are the revised sentences, complete with commas (when they are needed).</em>
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<em>After I finished the Chicago Marathon, my legs were tired.</em>
<em>Muhammed Ali was the greatest athlete ever.</em>
<em>My mom told me to clean my room, wash the dishes, and take out the garbage.</em>
<em>I want to listen to my iPod in class, but my teacher won't let me.</em>
<em>If I had the chance, I would change our mascot to a gorilla.</em>
<em>No, I don't want to go to Taco Bell for lunch.</em>
<em>The fireworks were fun to watch.</em>
<em>Marcus Brutus, who was tricked by Cassius, was the last conspirator to stab Caesar.</em>
<em>Antony, thinking the conspirators would kill him, fled after he saw Caesar's dead body.</em>
Answer:
well is could be Informational text but that can try to persuade someone but I'm think Informational Text
Explanation:
The length of the wall is 4,018 meters , their average height is 12meter , and the average thickness is 2.5 meters(8.5 feet) . The walls contain 34 watchtowers and seven main gates open for traffic,with two minor gates reopened by archaeologists.."
Excerpt: The start of school on the reservation was always hectic. I couldn't hear myself think above the talking and laughing, and it didn't seem like any of us were ready to trade our summers for book reports and math worksheets. What started as a chorus of whispers from desk to desk cranked up to almost a roar, with no teacher in sight. When the door opened, all conversation stopped. A tall, bearded man strode into the room and slapped a lesson planner onto his desk. The entire class sucked in their breath, and I could hardly believe my eyes. It was my uncle Mahkah.
Answer: Some dialogue that helps to develop the character of Uncle Mahkah.
An introduction describing the life of Takoda and Uncle Mahkah.
Explanation:
Takoda can use these two options and it will help him to make the narrative more interesting and exciting to readers. He is using personal narrative that is written in the first person.
He is describing an event from the author's life which is including the start of school and his feelings about that. At the end of the excerpt, there is Uncle Mahkah that is mentioned but since we don't know anything about him <u>it would be good for writer to develop his character with dialogue, description of his life or some interesting details so it can be also more understandable for the readers. </u>
The correct answer is My brother and I enjoy playing pool on the weekends.