The Revision that best achieves the objective is option (D)i.e, He submerged the ice-encased rock into a tray of water and sand, and then he created big wind by gently blowing the rock across the tray.
<h3 /><h3>What do you mean by Revision of the sentence?</h3>
Revision is the process of rephrasing a sentence while preserving its original meaning. Through sentence reframing, a complicated sentence can be made simpler.
It can also be used to switch from direct speech to indirect speech and from the active voice to the passive voice.
Hence the Revision that best maintains the same overall tone of the paragraph is option (D).
To know more about active voice refer to: brainly.com/question/25897080
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Answer:
People who enjoy english!
Explanation:
Many of them are probably failed writers or wanted to be in professions other then english but they grew complacent
I would say the correct answer is A. <span>Both use everyday language. Both Sandburg and Frost use common, conversational language, without poetic artificialities or any extravagance in form and style. There are no strict rhyme and meter, such as iambic pentameter or blank verse. They communicate their message directly, in an intimate and easily accessible tone.</span>
I’m really sorry but i can’t answer without the story? :( <3