Sentence provides commentary information for elaboration of a concrete detail.
D) It was a good idea to wear short sleeves and a light jacket that could be taken off easily in the afternoon.
The concrete detail:
short sleeves and a light jacket
The commentary information for elaboration of the concrete detail:
that could be taken off easily in the afternoon.
To do so, I guess I'd say use proper grammar and format.
Although your sister isn't someone to write formally to, if you write properly it's good to do in the end
Lol i assume this is what you mean?
As in rough draft? In the rough draft, you need to have a basic outline of your final draft. As in a few sentences in the first paragraph so on and so forth. It doesn't have to be pretty and neat. That's why it's called a rough draft.
His motivation is the lack of self confidence, so he lies to make him seem appealing to the viewer
