If a paragraph has more than one main idea, consider eliminating sentences that relate to the second idea, or split the paragraph into two or more paragraphs, each with only one main idea. Watch our short video on reverse outlining to learn a quick way to test whether your paragraphs are unified. In the following paragraph, the final two sentences branch off into a different topic; so, the revised paragraph eliminates them and concludes with a sentence that reminds the reader of the paragraph’s main idea.
This is a story will u mark branliest please. Anyway, in The Lottery it is a lot different from the glass of milk because of the storyline. In the glass of milk it talk about completely different subjects than the lottery. such as, how the storyline takes place.
She is hurt which gave further detail that she was cheated on by him and their love was not real.
