Answer:
The best way to revise the sentence is:
D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.
Explanation:
<u>The original sentence is not really defective, it is only missing a piece of information concerning when the car wash will be held. The best way to add it is to include it at the end of the sentence, as is done in letter D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.</u>
Let's take a look at the other options to understand why they are not usable.
Letter A does begin with the subject of the sentence, but interrupts it with extra information, preventing the sentence from being a direct one. It sounds really confusing. Letter B adds the "on Saturday" information at a strange place, also interrupting the direct flow of the sentence. Letter C puts the "on Saturday" information right at the beginning. It's not that this can't be done. But, in this case, a comma should be added after it. Nevertheless, it makes the introduction of the sentence too long, which is not a good thing.
First one is A, second one is B
Answer:
ans 6. (clean) are being cleaned
ans 7. ( finish,not ) wouldn't be finished
ans 8. ( turn on ) (I don't understand the question as I think the correct ) sentence would be....why was the tv turned on .no one was watching it
ans 9. ( remodel,not ) wasn't remodeled
ans 10. ( must leave ) must be leaved / must be left
ans 11. ( test ) was, being tested
ans 12. ( sell ) ( I think in this you don't need to fill anything as the sentence is correct itself ) the last umbrella was sold last night
ans 13. (not allow ) would be not allowed
hope this are correct :)
