At first you take my love. I hope you are keeping well. I am also well. You wanted to know about my family. Now I am giving you the short description about my family.
Our family is not so big. We are a small family. Our family live in the main town is kathmandu metropolitan city. I live in my family with my parents. I ha e one brother and 2 sister.
The best answer to the question: Which strategy did the writer use to revise this sentence, would be: The writer used the strategy of combining two independent clauses and turning them into one sentence by using the transitional word BECAUSE.
